How to Write an Engaging Subject Line
Email newsletters
or email marketing campaigns contain important messages, tips, savings,
and more for your subscribed readers. The information inside the email
is important to them, but without a compelling subject line, your
subscribers may never open it. Email subject lines are just as
important, if not more, than the rest of the information in the email.
The subject line's main purpose is to get someone to open the email.
Take these tips into consideration when writing your next compelling
subject line for your email.
Even before writing the body of an
email, it is essential to begin to think of the subject line for the
email. Although it is not the bulk of what you want your subscribers to
read, it is what they will read first and makes them decide if they
will continue reading. You must think thoroughly and objectively about
your subject line.
Take a look at the newspaper. The headlines
are made to grab attention in as few words as possible, and they do a
pretty good job of doing just that. They sum up the main idea of the
text and give it to readers in just a few words. Subject lines in an
email should do the same thing: state the purpose and a summary of what
the main idea is in as little words as possible. Each email will have a
different subject line because each email body will be different.
Find
which type of subject line you prefer. Asking a question in your
subject line will leave the readers wondering about the answer inside.
Another type of subject line is the tease subject line. By teasing your
subscribers with a clever subject line, they will want to know and read
more. A direct approach will explain exactly what you want readers to
know without any tricks or gimmicks. You can be personal in a subject
line by saying "you" to get the attention of your readers. Be careful
when using a direct approach or a personal subject line, your readers
may be drawn to the attention of the subject line but maybe not
compelled to read any further.
Avoid red flags for spam in your
subject lines. These red flags include using all capital letters,
multiple exclamation points, and the word "free." Not only do they wave
a giant red flag for spam, but it also is not visually appealing. It
will stand out, but look very silly. A subject line such as: "FREE GIFT
INSIDE!!!!! OPEN FOR MORE DETAILS!!!!!!!" will be red flagged and
marked as spam. On the other hand, a subject line such as "Your chance
for a complimentary gift inside!" is more appropriate.
Test your
subject lines out with colleagues. An effective way to do this is to
present the subject line without any additional information in the
email and see if it is compelling and intriguing enough for them to
want to know more. Also, keep an eye on your web analytics. It will
show you open rates for the emails you send out to get an idea of how
your subject line worked. Additionally, test the email before sending
it to the masses. Send it to yourself to get a preview of the subject
line. Be sure that what you want to be seen is seen, and that you are
not cutting off any important words or information.
Last but not least, a subject line should pass two tests: the Must-Read Test and the Unbulk Test. The Must-Read Test will leave the subscriber feel left out or missing out on something if they don't open the email. The Unbulk
Test comes into play if your email ends up in a filtered folder; the
subscriber should feel inspired and compelled to read or move it to the
inbox.
What kind of subject line would get you to open an
email?
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